Feedback on Thriller Opening

By uploading my groups 2 minute opening thriller "The Unspoken Truth" we posted it on various different sites such as facebook, twitter etc to get feedback
Here's some of the comments:

Overall the feedback we got was very positive, it was a nice indication that the audience enjoyed it and were "spooked" out as that's the effect we wanted. However there were some slight confusion and the title sequences going fast; by those comments my group and I will make the changes.

It was good posting our opening to see general feedback and by getting some constructive criticism it highlighted what we should of done to make our thriller opening more effective; which we did;

This picture shows that we changed the speed of one of the points; and as a result it was much easier to read and understandable.